Tater’s First Story

I’m doing two separate posts on his stories for school. The first one he dictated to me and I wrote the ‘original’ and he then copied it and made changes as he saw fit. I only have the first page to show you because the teacher hung it up in the class for a while. I will type the whole story for your enjoyment. It was funny.

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Now for the whole story:

One day on the moon an astronaut rat played a joke on a fox. The fox was about to eat the rat when the rat offered the fox a million fox dollars, but the rat lied. Then the rat made a gingerbread fox and boy. Rat gave the fox the gingerbread fox. The fox ate the gingerbread fox. The fox yelled at the rat, “You lied, you didn’t give me a million fox dollars! You only gave me a gingerbread fox.” The fox eats the rat. Then gingerbread boy comes looking for people so he can shoot cookies at them for $5. He runs into the fox. The fox wants to eat the gingerbread boy. He shoots four cookies into a moon rock tree and the fox goes after the cookies and the gingerbread boy runs away.

I laughed when he told it and laughed harder when I saw the finished product. That boy has some imagination.

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2 Responses to Tater’s First Story

  1. pam says:

    That’s a very intricately woven story for his age! Go, Tater!!

  2. Mrs. Who says:

    Oh, that was fantastic! He’s great with details.